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best friends or not?!
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best friends or not?! |
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mysticangel001 New Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 7 |
your supossed to be my best friend your supossed to be nice your supossed to stick up for me what happend?? why are you now mean? why dont you trust me? you were my friend now your not i told you not to be with them you did anyways were not friends anymore becuase of them only if you would of listened to me and not them we might still be friends now were not and we shall never be again!!! |
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UnsilencedWords666 Member
since 2003-11-19
Posts 63Broken Memories & Falling Tears |
wow-i like it and i can totally relate, this is how me and my now ex-bestfriend matt are...one day i stopped being good enough for him...so i feel ya...keep up the good work! *~*Nessa Bear*~* Living a normal life is not living a life...it's living for everyone else *~*Nessa Bear*~* |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
hmmm...too forward for me. anyone can write this. if this is just a vent then great, but you really want to be poetic, find ways to express those feelings that no one has thought of. use metaphors and the like to grab the readers attention. -alex now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very sad that you and your friend don't get along anymore! I hope that you can patch things up soon. Welcome to Passions! Hope to see you around some more.  ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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