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Jealousy |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
A wave of rage, Rips through my body, My vision turns to red, I hate reality. I can’t this anymore, I turn my back on you. I saw you with her and, My ego takes the hit, right on cue. My raging fire turns to ashes, And I’m all burnt-out. I wish I could figure, What you’re really about. My anger turns to sadness, And suddenly I feel sick. My mood was changed that easy, And just that quick. I’m on the verge of tears, But I also want to scream. But I’ll let the tears flow, Like a never-ending stream. They never stop, They never fade. They never leave, They’ve always stayed. Sometimes they’re not visible, But they’re always from my heart. And slowly, but surely, They’re tearing me apart… This rage caused by you, Has just scarred me. I hate this feeling, This thing called Jealousy. I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
if we...do not fight to the death...they will kill us both...(que klingon battle music) |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
hahahaha dertah, way to ruin the poem. hahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! good job, to both of you...... |
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UnsilencedWords666 Member
since 2003-11-19
Posts 63Broken Memories & Falling Tears |
I like this a lot...As mellow dramatic(in a GOOD WAY~) as it sounds I have totally felt this way before, awesome job :o) *~*Nessa Bear*~* Living a normal life is not living a life...it's living for everyone else *~*Nessa Bear*~* |
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mysticangel001 New Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 7 |
i think it was a gret poem. it seems as if i went throgh the same thing. well great job!!! :-D |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, whoa this poem has a lot of relateability (dunno if i spelt that right, but screw it lol) i hate being jealous, yet it seems like i constantly am. you did a great job describing the feeling. nice write. keep doin it. -bergundy- "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I loved this poem. It was reallly reallly good! ~kissa~ |
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