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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-11-24 06:55 AM



So far in…
So far in…

So far in, I can’t get out.
These walls I’ve built so solidly
Are crumbling, falling apart,
Caving in on me.

I can’t allow you to see,
The pain hidden behind my eyes,
So I’ll start rebuilding my walls,
And try to put a silence to my cries.

I hate feeling,
The way I do,
This feeling you’ve created,
WHAT DID I EVER DO TO YOU?!

It’s taking its toll…
It’s taking its toll…

It’s taking its toll on me,
All this energy I exert,
To not break down in front of you,
To keep hiding all my hurt.

We….are no more,
That much I can see,
I wish it was different,
But it wasn’t meant to be.

I hate feeling,
The way I do,
This feeling you’ve created,
WHAT DID I EVER DO TO YOU?!

I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX

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dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-11-24 12:18 PM


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PrincessNets
Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103
NewYork, USA
2 posted 2003-11-24 01:42 PM


I really like this one!  I think a lot of people can relate to it.  Knowing so much pain caused by certain people and never wanting them to see it. Good job.

-Jeanette

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