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BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2003-11-23 08:03 PM


With a white flag in hand
I wave my surrender
You can have my heart
I don't want it anymore

Pawn it off for cash
Sell it in the Black Market
Throw it into the street
To let each car run over it

It means nothing to you now
You've made that clear
So do with it what you wish
It's all yours now

Trampled and battered
It is useless to me now
So you can have my heart
I don't want it anymore*

**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

© Copyright 2003 J.Lynn - All Rights Reserved
Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2003-11-23 08:46 PM


that sounds like it hurts....you should keep it...give it to someone worthy of it

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies.   Dimmu Borgir

dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

2 posted 2003-11-24 12:20 PM


tis true tis true.....ahhhhhhhhhhhh
PrincessNets
Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103
NewYork, USA
3 posted 2003-11-24 01:44 PM


Wow! I know how you feel!  I'm sorry... no one should have to deal with that.  You expressed your pain beautifully though.  I like this poem.  Good job.

-Jeanette-

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