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greco
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0 posted 2003-11-22 07:09 PM




People always say they will change
But when does it really happen?
People want to change the way they went through high school
But they are never wise enough to figure this out when in high school
People on always want to change their lives
Sitting on their death bed thinking about what they would have done different
Why should we think about what we could have done different?
Why not just do it differently?
Why not sit on our death bed and say: I have lived a good life
People don’t now what life is anymore
They loose every meaning in life
Just sit back and change your life, just live and don’t get so caught up in problems
Don’t look for the easy way out
Look at the simpler things in life and enjoy them
Sit on your death bed and say: It’s time for me to go.


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1 posted 2003-11-22 08:20 PM


There is a lot of wisdom in this Greco, and if people don't slow down and start to take life as it is offered, they will indeed be sitting at the ends with a pile of "what ifs!"  Nicely done.
magic_612
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since 2003-07-31
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2 posted 2003-11-22 08:21 PM


you had a great message here.. I agree with you completely. Too many people spend their whole lives unhappy and trying to fix things they are unable to. Those little things in life are definately what counts
dertah
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3 posted 2003-11-22 09:47 PM


im looking forward to euthanasia...
Ally Stone
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4 posted 2003-11-22 10:27 PM


What a thought provoking write! I really liked your message, it drove the piece well. It IS SOOO important to live life to the fullest. Carpe Diem!
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greco
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5 posted 2003-11-22 11:25 PM


Carpe Diem is exactly right thanks for getting the message right on

frolicking dolphin
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my own special world
6 posted 2003-11-23 08:38 AM


This actually made me think about a recent problem of mine and I decided to look past it instead of worry about it like I've done for the past 2 days, nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them~Walt Disney

greco
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7 posted 2003-11-25 03:59 PM


well glad i could help i guess
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