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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-11-21 08:20 PM



The emotions,
Fade into nothing.
A numb feeling.
Like a winter coldness,
Crept into my room,
Entered my head,
Making me no longer,
Feel.
Care.
Why should I?
I know you don’t.
Maybe...no one does.
So...why should I?
Trapped inside,
This icy terrain,
I can’t breathe.
I can’t think.
Good.
Knowing what’s going on around me,
I don’t want to think.
I don’t want to cross that line,
That will send me into the drama.
I don’t need that.
Falling.
Deeper into the freeze.
So cold...
That numbing feeling comes back,
I welcome it.

I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX

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with you
1 posted 2003-11-21 08:55 PM


"Trapped inside,
This icy terrain,
I can’t breathe.
I can’t think.
Good."

excellent

BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
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2 posted 2003-11-22 10:44 AM


Staci, MG, this was AwEsOmE! I loved EVERY work of this poem! GREAT write!

~J.Lynn

**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

3 posted 2003-11-22 09:29 PM


i dont get the title....
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