High Lights and My Screamo Friends

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young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2003-11-21 07:36 PM

High Lights and My Screamo Friends

Staring into shining lights
With the blinding center peice.
I'm star struck, seeing pinpoints,
But not from you finally saying please,
Even though it is a wonder to be sure,
Your glare states the opposite of your words.
That's why i escaped into the blindness
Of the brilliant luminators only living from power chords.
I'm struggling to hear the screams of this band;
The mixture of melodic guitar and straining voices
Drown out the sarcasm that shrowds your sentences,
They were menat to destroy the euphoria of my choices.
Endings dont always mean the deth of something,
It could mean the birth of new discoveries,
One found away from your fallen appreciation,
But i'm not phased, I've had a million such recoveries.
Let's keep this hush-hush, low key, and secret.
None will know of our end since none knew of our beginning.
I'm jumping the gun on making new favorite memories
So old ones can quickly begin a quiet and sure thinning.
Maybe you'll miss the chances you had when
You never meet up with opportunity again.
Maybe you'll realize the mistakes you incurred when
You look around and no one calls to you as a friend.
Give and take, but why give when you can steal?
You know no give like i knew no take.
Live and die, but why live when you think you are already?
So I Leave you and finally you'll see how much was at stake.

now im alone, but not lonely like before

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-11-21 08:53 PM

wow!!! seriously, this is amazing....I am keeping this one....it rocks....

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

2 posted 2003-11-22 08:08 AM

this is amazing! great job

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2003-11-22 11:14 AM

thanks alot guys. this one was really tough for me to write. i wrote it in like five minutes but it just seemed....alright. some parts were not the way i wanted them to be at all. thank you so much for the feedback though.
-alex

now im alone, but not lonely like before

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

4 posted 2003-11-22 03:02 PM

hey,
wow, this was a pretty groovy piece. i loved the last line, it's like how to sum up my love life in one sentence at the moment lol. thanks for sharing, the only piece of bitch i can offer you is that you spelt death wrong...but i dunno. i think deth looks neat too. keep postin.

-bergundy-

i am so full of love, i am so full of hate. i am so full of these feelings that tear me every which way. -BHC

when i grow up i want to be a rocket

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

5 posted 2003-11-22 03:11 PM

i spelled deth wrong on purpose, ive got a crazy filter on my computer and it wont let me spell it along with many other words, so if the whole thing is spelled right except for one word, its probably because of the filter.
-alex

now im alone, but not lonely like before

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

6 posted 2003-11-22 09:40 PM

hmmmmmm

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