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Isolation |
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PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
Ok, I haven't posted in forever. I am sure that none of you remember me or any of my previous posted poems. Anyway, I am just glad to be posting again. Hope you like it. ---------------------------- Sitting here All alone It feels like Nobody cares Surrounded by people But still alone Left out Singled out In a crowd of one Mobs of people All around Yet I am Still alone Always alone Single, Solitary Yet part of something Life's cruel joke Some sort of punishment For something I know not what Don't know how to deal Or what to do Sitting here All alone Isolated as I ever shall be |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
yes mr anderson.....life's cruel joke... |
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PeaceInEverything Junior Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 31Ohio, United States |
I remember these feelings. The pain of rememberance is still there. I thank you for this powerful poem. Rememberance... |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
this is not very good, to tell you the truth. I know there is not a specific form that you need to follow, but this is soooo repetitive that it made my head hurt. go a little deeper than your obvious response to isolation. |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Well I liked it, it was emotional and it touched me because I have had the feeling of being alone like that before. ~*~Karen~*~ |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Isolation hurts!  ~ElizabethDreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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