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BlackDragon
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0 posted 2003-11-17 05:40 AM


Dog

My best friend is my dog,
He jumps in puddles and in muddy bogs,

He was very very bold,
But now he’s wrinkled fat and old.

When I was small I wondered if my dog talks,
I took him for very long walks.

The next morning I came out of bed,
I see my dog on the floor dead.

In the afternoon I’m in pain,
And this drove me insane
And I never was the same.

The next morning I went back to bed,
I couldn’t believe my dog was dead.
And I am depressed.

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dertah
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1 posted 2003-11-17 10:40 AM


sniffle sniffle....i miss my dog too.
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2 posted 2003-11-17 01:55 PM


I'm sorry to hear about the loss of your dog! You have a lot of good memories of him. Please check your email for a special message!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

magic_612
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3 posted 2003-11-17 07:56 PM


it's sooo hard when you lose pets.. they are just like kids!
kissa~rachelle
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4 posted 2003-11-28 09:57 PM


I am so sorry you lost your dog! I don't know what i'd do if i ever lost my dogs! I would probably cry for atleast a week!They are like my best friend! I loved your poem!
~kissa~

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