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Struck by peer pressure
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Struck by peer pressure |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
Look in the mirror What do you see??? Compare yourself to Who you used to be You dont want to admit it You dont even want to try But the person you used to be not long ago said good bye They have changed you so much And fizzled your brain You've been struck by peer pressure So much so i cant explian Sure you wanna be like everyone else But in the end its true The only person your going to be Is just you Now that you know what you've become Your forcing yourself back Things are getting really tough And just too hard to hack You look in the mirror one last time And again say good bye To the stranger looking back at you The person who made your life Nothing but a lie...... this is me.... like it or not.... |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
hmmm, yes....if only. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
It's too bad that people choose to succumb to peer pressure! Being yourself takes courage, but in the end, it's what makes you happy. Very well done, Melissa!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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shara Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 69florida/USA |
i like this one |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
very good work |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
thanks for the repplies everyone... this is me.... like it or not.... |
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UnsilencedWords666 Member
since 2003-11-19
Posts 63Broken Memories & Falling Tears |
I don't know what to say other then I like it...it's so true that we are so worried about how others veiw us that we forget to keep ourselves happy, This is written extremely well, it paints a total mental picture of everytime I have ever second guessed that morning outfit or checked and checked again my make-up making sure it was perfect-keep up the amazing work, you have a lot of talent  ) *~*Nessa Bear*~* |
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