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young_blood
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0 posted 2003-11-15 02:07 PM



untilted

i would propose a test,
one of great difficulty,
one to answer second guesses
and all these sudden impulses.
maybe it will show corrections
that need to occur.
maybe it will show failures
that are soon coming.
this approach may be
more ambigious than you wish,
but its the only way i can
be sure of uncertainties.
the only way i can test the waters
without sinking into a sea of misunderstanding.
ambigiouty keeps me secure,
safe ans sound inside my head.
so selfish, neh?
so insensitive maybe,
but if my feelings spill
out of my tupperware bowl,
i may never be able
to gather my thoughts and emotions.
so what shall i do?
what could i possibly say to you?
i dont have a response,
forgive me for this sin.
maybe one day i'll know redemption,
but for now.........my thoughts remain my own.

now im alone, but not lonely like before

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1 posted 2003-11-15 07:49 PM


Nice work, Alex. I like your approach in this. Well done!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

young_blood
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2 posted 2003-11-16 11:51 AM


thanks alot for commenting!!

now im alone, but not lonely like before

dertah
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3 posted 2003-11-16 12:52 PM


redemption.........
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