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since 2003-11-15
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0 posted 2003-11-15 02:05 PM


i hate to live
i hate to die

you are the one i loved
you are the one i hated

you made me relieved
you made me endured

you are the reason i lived
you are the reason i grieved

you made me satisfied
you made me emptied

i want to love
i want to hate

you are the truth
that i elude
you are my everything
that i evade

now that i have learnt
the fact
me & you

the truth
is the faith
the lie
is to die

embrace me
i need your warmth
receive me
i want growth

living for the truth .

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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2003-11-15 07:52 PM


Welcome to Passions! It's hard to understand God's ways, but I liked your exploration in this poem. On a personal level, I don't know where I'd be without God's help. I hope you find what you're looking for! Once again, welcome! Check your email for a special message.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

dertah
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since 2003-06-18
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2 posted 2003-11-16 12:53 PM


good oonnnnneeeeeeeee
duncan idaho
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dune
3 posted 2003-11-17 02:06 PM


when are they gonna put that damned book in the fiction section.   religion is political tool, not a spiritual guide.
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