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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Which way do I go?.. Which way can I turn?.. Nowhere.. Lost in a vortex of pain, Feelings, tears, and silent cries. I want to leave... Just run away to... Anywhere… Lost in a vortex of isolation, Misery, torment, and lies. I sit here, still awake.... Crying over that thought... I’m here. Trapped in the wrath, Of the vortex. I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX |
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Olive_8 Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 41Canada |
Uhhh, i am not quite sure what to say to that. It got me thinking i guess about some stuff, and it is makin me realize that somethings can acutally be as bad as they seem, i always wanted to see the good side of things, but after reading that my situation became a whole lot clearer, and it does look pretty grim. Thanks for the read and making me realize that things are not always so nice! ~*Everything will be ok in the end, and if it is not ok, then it is not the end.~* |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
yes grimm indeed....hello mr anderson... |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
there are no foreshore things in life but fear and uncertainty always seem to me one of them. good write and keep writing when you live you begin to die |
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MiSsPoEticBaBi07 New Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 4 |
very very good !!!!!!keep up the good work. this poem is very deep .. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I agree--sometimes things can be really bad. It's hard to get through them. Well done.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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