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Teen Poetry #7

Can't Let Go.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-11-12 08:30 PM

I’m sorry (sorry).
For everything that’s happened
I’m sorry (sorry).
Wishing I could take it all back...
But knowing I can’t...
I’m sorry (sorry).
Haunting me in my sleep,
Dragging me down in my dreams,
Making it worse…than it seems.
I’m sorry (sorry).
All that we have been through,
All the arguments, tears, agony,
It has brought us nowhere,
And given us nothing,
Except the pain we now share.
I’m sorry (sorry).

I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-11-12 11:00 PM

i like the temptations....they were good.
(this has been a misguided thought by dertah)

xtel
Junior Member

since 2003-11-02

Posts 16

2 posted 2003-11-13 06:30 AM

Good poem...
It seems good for the lyrics of a song

xte|

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

3 posted 2003-11-19 10:40 AM

Sounds like a song...*gets lost in her own world* This was really good...

~J.Lynn

**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

THE-1-U-DISLIKE
Junior Member

since 2003-11-07

Posts 20

4 posted 2003-11-19 10:53 AM

ooooooh so nice poem

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

5 posted 2003-11-20 08:52 AM

This was a good poem and I have to say that it does sound a lot like a song. Have you ever thought about putting it to music? That would be a great song. Good write!

~Jeanette~

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