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Street Poet
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0 posted 2003-11-10 12:36 PM



"I Wanna Be Where You Are"

Today's agenda being lonely and bored
My heart hurts as if it has been stabbed with a sword
Because girl I wanna be where you are
I can't stand the thought knowing you are going so far
Each mile seems like an eternity
I know its only been a day since you last heard from me
But I gotta let you know how I feel cause this is really hurting me
Girl I know you feel the same way
So lets just pack our stuff and leave today
Destination, I don't care
Because whenever we're together its beautiful
We can be in the hood chillin' or in France watching a musical
I wanna be where you are
The say love has no boundaries right?
Then explain why this seperation between us is breaking my heart
I just wanna be where you are

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dertah
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1 posted 2003-11-10 09:45 AM


if only.......

good write

LiL-Jew
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since 2003-10-28
Posts 30

2 posted 2003-11-12 06:06 PM


not bad. very passionate.
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3 posted 2003-11-12 09:21 PM


Very passionate! Did she like it?

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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