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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
The room starts to spin, And my world starts to shake. This feeling starts to win, And my heart starts to ache... For You. This feeling wouldn’t leave, That memory couldn’t be torn apart. I was so naïve to believe, That it wouldn’t hurt my heart... For You. And still I grieve, Over something I did to myself. No comfort will I receive, As I put my heart up on a shelf... For You... I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow.....this is fantastic  |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
slurrrrring worrrds of confusionnnn.... this isss a favvvvorite. |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
this is really well done! great job |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Yesh yesh, it's a keeper! LOL. Great work, this was a really good one! ~Jess  "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very well done....but don't keep your heart up on that shelf forever. Just give it a little break to grow strong again. Best of luck!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Thanks everyone, I'm glad you all liked this! Your replies are much appreciated. I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX |
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