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Lisa_bebe15
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since 2001-11-15
Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2003-11-07 10:49 AM


Its that feeling I can’t describe,
There are no words that can.
You make me complete,
Driving me crazy.
I’m so in love with you.
Every minute I’m away from you,
Seems like hours
Laying down with you by my side,
Looking into your eyes,
Getting lost in them.
Feeling so calm, and happy.
My hand in yours,
I start to giggle.
Whispering I love you in my ear.
Never been this close to anyone.
I can't imagine being with anyone but you.

Class Of 2004
"Water Over Matter"

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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
1 posted 2003-11-07 02:49 PM


i really liked this poem, gald to see you writing i like love poems they make me happy and give me hope that there will be someone out there for me.  good write and keep wrting
this one is going into my library

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

2 posted 2003-11-07 06:16 PM


oh the wonderful days long past...
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