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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-11-05 06:26 PM



Oh how you love to,
Instigate all these thoughts,
And all these nightmares.
Oh how you love to,
Simply take everything away,
All my love and all my cares.

Oh how you love to,
Simply take everything away,
And turn it into pain.
Oh how you love to,
Leave and love to go,
Keeping me here...to remain.

Oh how you love to,
Slowly take parts of me,
And turn them to stone.
Oh how you love to,
Keep me locked up,
Here...completely alone.

"Cut my life into pieces, this is my last resort."~PaPaRoach

© Copyright 2003 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
BabieDoll
Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE
1 posted 2003-11-05 06:29 PM


I really, really liked this one Staci! You were right...I loved it! Hehehe.

~J.Lynn

**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

snoduck
Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99
Selah, WA
2 posted 2003-11-05 06:31 PM


Interesting... but I think I got the message.  I have always been a fan of your writing!! Keep up the good work!

-Erica-

magic_612
Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190
NB, Canada
3 posted 2003-11-05 07:30 PM


this is a great poem.. thanks for sharing
dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

4 posted 2003-11-06 12:43 PM


suuuuuuuuuuper!!!!!!
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