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These Words |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
Hello... this is a repost from an archived forum... i had no replies for this so if there's something you don't like please reply I would appreciate it... thanks these words which come from your mouth tell me there not true, please for a moment we were at ease although you still didn't see i tried and tried to make you understand first i lied and said it wasn't true then i defied you but together we were not, and things got worse fights with him turned into nights with you fights with you turned into nights with him i felt confused yet pleased within once, twice, and next i knew it was the fifth one good fight and that was it or so i thought back with you is what i sought forget him i said and so the lie came out, the pain brought it about we cried but you couldn't understand why you feared before that it would be him the truth you could not hear for a moment we were fine, closer than before and than it hit and the words came out you slut............ you trick!!!!!!!! and the door shut in my face a prick of pain i can't erase now the hurt sticks in a place i'm really not what he says the truth he cannot face and so here i am in a place a place of denial a place of regret i bet he'll never see the love i had for him i shut him out and he in turn did me the same how ashamed can i be? |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
hmmmm, i really liked this one. good write |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
I liked this one, a few spelling mistakes but besides that nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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