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Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2003-10-30 04:40 PM

Well I havent posted here in a good while. This is first poem I've written in a while. Its about my girlfriend...and enough of my rambling.

I think you're the most gorgeous thing
that I've ever come across
you're relaxing touch and soothing smile
could warm me through any frost

Pumpkin, I cant help but love you
or hug you or touch you
Pumpkin, I cant help but hold you
or kiss you to console you

I know I tell you you're pretty a lot
and sometimes you may think its cheesy
but I'm being dead serious when I say it
and you make looking beautiful look easy

-Stinky Twinkie likes pumpkin pie.-

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-10-30 05:46 PM

Awww this was SO sweet! You best show her this poem! Good work! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-10-30 06:06 PM

Nice to see you posting here again. I like this poem, short and sweet.
Thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-10-30 06:39 PM

they always question dont they?......

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

4 posted 2003-10-30 08:28 PM

I dont get what you just said......always question what?

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

5 posted 2003-10-30 10:58 PM

wowww, you're so great. that was sweet and funny at the same time. ahh i missed you

-cassiopeia

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

6 posted 2003-10-30 11:33 PM

awww so sweet! and also very well written. a lucky girl indeed

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

7 posted 2003-10-31 01:55 PM

Wow, I haven't read anything by you in long time. This poem was really sweet. You're girlfriend is lucky to have someone like you. I hope you come back and post some more.
Jen

I hate what I've become to esacpe what I was.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-10-31 03:31 PM

Awww, this is so cute. I'll bet she
liked it, too.

Hugs

Ethel

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

9 posted 2003-10-31 09:40 PM

Like others have said...awww!! How sweet! She must be a very lucky girl indeed. Nice to see you around here again. Good right short and to the point but packed full of emotion and finesse. My favortie kind!
~Live and Laugh~

The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again
~Bella~

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