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KeEbLeR_eLf06
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since 2003-10-24
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0 posted 2003-10-29 08:24 PM



I would wait an eternity for you my love,

Whenever you are away you take my heart with you,

I am always left behind, never able to go with you when you leave.

Always left to wait as each passing second becomes lost in the sea of time,

Each moment that passes I feel another part of my heart break away,

Yet I am still here waiting, my whole being crumpling just so I can see you once more.

Please come back soon my love, for I am still here waiting for you,

To have you in my arms again and for you to give me back my heart, which you took so long ago.

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C_ROK06
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since 2003-10-23
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1 posted 2003-10-29 08:33 PM


OH my gosh Becky!!!! that was sooo beautifull... tell me... have you been through that to compell you to write this? just wonderin gurly. Love ya babez! THAT WAS SOOO WONDERFULL ^_^ *hug* -vik
dertah
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since 2003-06-18
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2 posted 2003-10-29 09:39 PM


ha ha dude....i am the one
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-10-29 11:44 PM


This is a beautifullly written romantic poem.
My favorite poems are romantic ones. That's about
all I write. I really enjoyed this one.
Hugs  
Ethel

WinterWren
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4 posted 2003-10-30 11:24 AM


First off, welcome to pip!! I really enjoyed this poem, I can relate to it.
Thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

-=Kiff=-
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since 2003-10-21
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5 posted 2003-10-30 06:05 PM


That’s beuitfiful man.

He who seeks peace must first prepare for war.

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