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Teen Poetry #7

Love Rides Shotgun

SimpleDiscourse
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2003-10-28 09:56 PM

In your car
Rain beats down

Drip
by
Drop

A coin is flipped:
TAILS
Your turn to steer
My turn to press the gas

In your car
Rain beats down

Drip
by
Drop

A coin is flipped:
HEADS
Hit the brakes
Fall in love

In your car
Rain beats down

Drip
by
Drop

A coin is flipped
and lost under the seat.

From here on out:
Love rides shotgun.

(Leave it up to me.
Leave it up to me.
Leave it up to me.)

In your car
Rain beats down

Drip
by
Drop
. . . . .

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

1 posted 2003-10-28 10:35 PM

Interesting write. keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-10-28 10:49 PM

yesssss......very interesting isnt it smithers.

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

3 posted 2003-10-29 10:24 AM

Alright this is different and I have to say caught my attention. Flipping coins getting them caught in seats and having Love ride shotgun. Interesting.

NJS

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2003-10-29 11:48 AM

hhmm, yes interesting. Very different. I like it.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

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