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Teen Poetry #7

never thoughts

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2003-10-28 08:46 PM

never thought the darkness would come again, rising in my breast,
i never wanted to close my eyes and let my tears stream.
Hidden in my closet so none can hear my quiet, anguished screams,
staring darkly at the imagined creatures that put me to the test.

i never wanted to push play and let depression be my best,
i never thought the days to come would interest me,
always trying to make a slow even more agonizing,
for isolation in my head brings a cold emptiness in my chest.

change the brought by a y crest,
i make out the sound of like a choir,
and end is approaching like the coming hour,
when it arrives, i wont be counted among the blessed.

nothing is so frightening to a human's chest,
as the things unknown to us, things beyond life and ,
things that disturb us forever and steal away our breath,
but to me, the fear and ly ignorance is held in my breast.

now im alone, but not lonely like before

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-28 10:47 PM

hmmmmmm (hatred is deep in thought)

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

2 posted 2003-10-29 10:18 AM

Holding it all in your chest could be a little too much. Well someone has got to be the hero, and it probaly won't be me. Nice write and way to go.

NJS

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-10-29 11:50 AM

I really like this one, especially the line "I never wanted to push play and let depression be my best." Wow..
Thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

4 posted 2003-10-29 12:20 PM

thanks for commenting guys!!

now im alone, but not lonely like before

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