Three Conversations in October

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SimpleDiscourse
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2003-10-26 10:23 PM

This is completely random. And it's not all that good. Eh. The bold is one person and the italics is the other. And..yes.
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Where did October go?
“I love you.”
“As a friend or romantically?”
“Does it matter?”
“I think so.”
“I don’t.”
“Give me an answer.”
“Both.”
“Oh.”

Where did October go?
“Are you ever afraid?”
“Of what?”
“Anything. . .”
“Sometimes.”
"Are you afraid right now?"
"No."
"You're shaking."
"It's cold out tonight."

Where did October go?
"I think I love you too."
"Do you think or do you know?"
"Does it matter?"
"Yes."
". . .I don't know."
"I can't do this anymore."
"I know. Me neither."

November could not have come sooner.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-26 11:58 PM

hmmmmm

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2003-10-27 11:19 AM

I've never read anything like this before. It was interesting and I liked it a lot! I just wanted to read over it a few more times! Great work! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

3 posted 2003-10-27 03:45 PM

It was an interesting style, but I think it worked pretty well, nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-10-27 04:55 PM

I've never seen this style before. I liked it a lot. Thanks for the read, it was very intersting.
Jen

"Worry is like a rocking chair--it gives you something to do but
it doesn't get you anywhere." -- Dorothy Galyean

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

5 posted 2003-10-27 05:23 PM

that was extremely cool. the whole idea of it.hmmm....if you refine it more it would be really awesome stuff

now im alone, but not lonely like before

Ally Stone
Junior Member

since 2003-10-20

Posts 48
D.C.

6 posted 2003-10-27 05:27 PM

First time I've seen this style, awesome job!

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

7 posted 2003-10-27 07:11 PM

Wow...I really liked this. Especially the ending. Great job.

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

lauren03
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 64
oh, usa

8 posted 2003-10-27 07:40 PM

that was very different and very unique, good job........ i liked it alot

Third Libra
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since 2003-08-10

Posts 125
South Carolina

9 posted 2003-10-27 07:46 PM

...damn...

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

SimpleDiscourse
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

10 posted 2003-10-27 10:06 PM

thanks so much guys. i didn't expect this to get that big of a response.

Silent Evincar
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since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

11 posted 2003-10-28 09:54 AM

This is sooo cool. It's refeshing and new... I read it twice just because it was that cool. I think I'll read it again.

NJS

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

12 posted 2003-10-29 11:40 AM

As everyone else said, I really love the style in this. the poem and the style are very different. I like it alot! Thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

13 posted 2003-10-29 12:03 PM

interesting vary interesting... hummmm...interesting but good keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

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