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lauren03
Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 64
oh, usa

0 posted 2003-10-26 02:36 AM

I've tried so hard to make you both so happy
I've cried, I've screamed, gone silent......
but in the end here I am
asking once again what to do

you.... the one I've known for so long
perfect, but not in every way
there for me through everything but.....
seeing things my way isn't your way

call my name and I do come
others say I'm so dumb
saying they just don't understand
.... proven wrong once again.....

you... the one I've fallen in love with
the one who was there before all this
the one who says they don't care
seeing things my way isn't your way

saying you don't care but calling instead
saying to me that I am dead
not talking, lieing instead is your way
....two different stories must be read....

the way I feel for you both
interupted my entire life
I sit and cry... wonder why
why I can't just choose one?

one who knows all
the other shows all
both lie in so many ways

both, they say........
I should leave
but to live without I cannot
to love two people in this way
is torture in so many ways
days spent with one and not the other
I just cannot choose,

I'm so confused......

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-26 08:43 AM

Oh goodness, Lauren, this is a very good poem, filled with emoton. If it's from personal experience, hope that you can choose soon.

Very good writing, this is.

Hugs

Ethel

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

2 posted 2003-10-26 11:37 AM

I agree with Ethel, great job. Best of luck in your choice, follow your heart.

lauren03
Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 64
oh, usa

3 posted 2003-10-26 12:25 PM

hey, thanks for the replies i really appreciate them. the poem is from personal experience and it's so hard.

Ally Stone
Junior Member

since 2003-10-20

Posts 48
D.C.

4 posted 2003-10-26 01:59 PM

wow...this one really applies to me on a very personal level, and you portrayed the emotions very well. Hope you can choose, I know I can't. Good Luck!
Ally

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

5 posted 2003-10-26 11:54 PM

hmmm, confusion.....second nature now.

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