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My Mask |
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C_ROK06 Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 49 |
I try and hide the pain I feel I put on a pretty face But when I succeed, I fail What you see is not what is real They all think I’m fine But inside, I’m hurting I don’t know what it is, Or how to stop it I want the pain to go away For some reason I know that you see You see the real me You see through my charades, My stupid masquerades And see me My pain and I Chained together ever so tightly You know how I feel But I won’t let you help me I want to be left alone But you won’t let me You’re determined to help To relieve my pain All this because you love me Because you think so much of me Even though I don’t deserve your thoughts, your feelings, or your time You’re still willing to set me free I see that you won’t let go of me And truth be told, I’m thankful Because I love you too I’ve been in this pit so long, so alone I need someone to help me Till now, I had forgotten what another voice had sounded like Because till now, mine was the only one I could hear So help me This mask has deprived everything from me Who I am Who I wanted to be It’s all lost Help me take this mask off And find myself again |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
find my self again???? |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
All this because you love me Because you think so much of me Even though I don’t deserve your thoughts, your feelings, or your time You’re still willing to set me free I see that you won’t let go of me Victoria, I really like your poem. It really does help when a person has someone who loves them like this. Thanks for sharing this with us.  Hugs  Ethel |
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C_ROK06 Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 49 |
thanx. yes.. "find myself again" the again just states that i had known who i was before all this, and i need to know myself again. i'm glad you liked my poem. ^_^ poetry is a wonderful means of expressing how you feel and is definately a stress reliever. i will continue to post and thanx for your encouragement. (pardon the spelling) ^_^ " So let us then try to climb the mountain, not by stepping on what is below us, but to pull us up at what is above us, for my part at the stars; amen |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
this was a beautiful piece. I completely understand what you mean when you say you have to find yourself again. It's funny how over time you change so much and you don't even know what you want anymore. Very great work, hope to see more of you  |
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monkey Junior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 27 |
really good poem. i think ill read it again! |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
"And truth be told, I’m thankful Because I love you too I’ve been in this pit so long, so alone" I really liked this one because I'm going through a lot of the same things right now, nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
Hey, This poem was great, I like how you put your thought so well together, nice work, keep writting you are awesome. Sincerely Chris G. |
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Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
This Poem was really awesome I like how you put your thoughts together this was a really nice peace thank you for sharing your feelings, sincerely Chris. |
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