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Whitehowl
Junior Member
since 2003-10-14
Posts 10


0 posted 2003-10-23 08:21 PM


Hey people, i wrote this awhile ago but i felt like posting it on here.  Just some thoughts of what you think.  Thanx.

Is it really all that good
When all I see is hatred and horror
The terrifying plague overcame us all
Massmurder and slaughter universally
Defeating like a shattered lost soul
I look deep and straight to the stars and wonder outloud
"Does it really have to be like this?"
Innocent young ones blinded by the unknowns
Don't see whats really happening in the setting
Scared for them to age then to see the atrocious truth
Too much suffering and pain for one to take, end up being fatal
Don't assume on sight and cooperate with your neighbors
Instant reaction to kill with touch upon an ally's mouth
Appalling but you see the same in the hearts of us
If only we could give out and take in equally
Operate as a team and take responsibility
If not, then how are we to survive

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dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-23 10:05 PM


survival of the fittest!!!!
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