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Teen Poetry #7
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colifer
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since 2003-09-20
Posts 37
Ohio
0 posted 2003-10-23 06:37 PM


Earth's work...old man's hands

The cloudless sky's blue turns black

the rythm of water...the dance of lands

worldly beat keeps lives on track

The day dances...whirling around

the earth follows whats led

tireless peasants work the ground

take care of family...born to dead.

clapping hands

gather and celebrate

life brings more to view

the aged and wise sing a song

a timeless blessing to you
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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-10-23 07:24 PM

This is very good, colifer.
I especially like this part......

clapping hands

gather and celebrate

life brings more to view

Hugs  
Ethel
dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584
2 posted 2003-10-23 10:07 PM

unique....
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