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Teen Poetry #7

what to do?

lauren03
Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 64
oh, usa

0 posted 2003-10-23 01:03 AM

Now I don't know what to do,
What direction I should choose?
To put on a show all over again
A final last hope that this could be

No words spoken in over a month
no last phone call saying goodbye
just the silence,
and the "us" thats finally died

nobody asks and no one calls
I sit alone and wonder what I've lost
this cost I paid was for him
but where is he?
gone...

Now I don't know what to do,
What direction I should choose?
Was I right or am I wrong?
That night spent with him has ruined it all

because you too are gone.....

Barbara
Junior Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 32

1 posted 2003-10-23 07:51 AM

waw...beautiful poem..
sometimes its right to jut let him go. :/

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-10-23 09:58 AM

not always the answer is it.....good job.

infinite disaster
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 69
Illinois

3 posted 2003-10-23 12:01 PM

wow ... that was really good.

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

4 posted 2003-10-23 03:49 PM

i never like reading poems about this subjuect but it was well wightten. keep wrighting

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

lauren03
Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 64
oh, usa

5 posted 2003-10-23 04:02 PM

thanks for all your replies, i really appreciate it, i'm going through kind of a rough time, thanks again

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