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Why
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since 2003-09-26
Posts 32
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0 posted 2003-10-21 04:45 PM


These tears that i cry, come through dry eyes
Yet no one even notices, no one even cares
They walk past me, as if i'm not there
As if when i talk to them, i cause them a scare
My words will never be repeated, cause this will Never be read
Cause no matter what i wish for, i'll end up dead

-Tiffany Belcher(my beautiful girlfriend)

Poems free us and trap us all the same.
But still they put our hearts at ease.

[This message has been edited by Why (10-21-2003 05:57 PM).]

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Silent Evincar
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since 2003-07-22
Posts 179
Here There and Places Between
1 posted 2003-10-21 05:15 PM


Short, complete, very expressive, and quick to the point; all with a poisonous tounge lashing at those who may never care or understand. Very productive and needlees to say, great.

       NJS

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
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2 posted 2003-10-21 09:34 PM


You said a lot in these few words.....
and I did read...and heard.  
Hugs  
Ethel

dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

3 posted 2003-10-22 12:22 PM


good onnnnnnneeeeeeeee
Peeps-Peter
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 14

4 posted 2003-10-22 07:19 PM


very emotional poem, I loved your choice of words. awesome job.
~Pete

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