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LiL-Jew
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since 2003-10-28
Posts 30


0 posted 2003-10-31 06:42 PM


Like a maze i try to find
A way just to get out
Directions go left and right
What is this life all about?
The greyish color of the cement
Binds me back to fear
Brings in the shaddows just to bent
But there's a voice i hear.

Fearfully turning where is it comming from?
This soft and beautiful voice i hear?
Could it be the Almighty one
Asking me to draw near
Fear pushes me back and astray i go
Like a sheep with out a pastor
The maze gets tangled dark and cold
A world of total disaster.

The light it fades into the dark
As i enter this whole new world
The maze is gone way too far back
My heart is left stone cold
With anger i scream WHERE WERE YOU GOD!
When i needed you here
Its you the one that broke my heart
And made my life a living fear.

Where were you just tell me where
Let me see your face
At my troubled times were you there
When i needed your grace?
Where is that peace that i once knew
Which you set into my heart
Why did you take that be to be with you
And broke my heart apart?

I heard the voice calling
And he called me once again
This soft voice that i know hear
Is calling me from heaven
My precious child i see your pain
And i know what your going through
For you see my son felt just the same
The day he died for you.

Trials and errors they come and go
Just dont you ever give in
I know temptations drive you so
That devil wont let you win
I gave you life through my son
Out of all my love and mercy too
It was the most painful thing that i have done
Only because i love you.


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dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-31 09:21 PM


sniffle sniffle
WinterWren
Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
2 posted 2003-10-31 09:28 PM


This is a very beautiful poem. Like dertah said, it brought some sniffles.
Thank you ever so much for sharing this one, Im putting it in my library.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

monkey
Junior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 27

3 posted 2003-11-09 08:25 PM


Very beautiful poem! I really loved it, it's going in my library.
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