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Those Tears |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Okay this is a year or two old so bear with me. I can still taste it, still taste the saltiness of the tears on my face still, I taste them... I can still feel it, still feel my heart beating rapidly in my chest still, I feel it... I can still hear your voice, still hear the sound of Love speak softly to me still, I can hear it... Once I could touch you, I used to be able to hold you once, that is... Once I could see you, when I could see your face smile at me once, I saw it... Once I could rub tears from my eyes, one time I could cry for you till I was dry once, to those tears... NJS |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
I like this, I've been there, and it isnt all that lovely. is it? Im sorry that you had to go through this, On an upside...It is really go great piece of poetry! ....Keep on writing how you feel, and eventually, you'll be fine.  As for this, its going into my favorites! * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
tears tears tears........taste good if you ask me. good write. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good poem. I enjoyed reading it, even though it is a little sad. "If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room |
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