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greco
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0 posted 2003-10-17 09:10 PM



Life can be lived as a whole
Life should be lived with compassion
Without life people would not know what to do
Some people play with models, and are nerds
Some people play sports
Some people are followers
And some people are just plain ordinary good people who don’t fit in
Those people are the most extraordinary people around
Those people can do so much with there life
They can do a little bit of everything but not everything as a whole
Those people are the great people who you always want to be
Those people don’t fit in to one specific “social group” in life
But those people always find a good friend and live life happy and free
Those people are the people that this world needs most
Those are the people who I myself am a part of
My friends and myself are people who know we are better than those high school punks
But I know I am going to get through it alright
And I know I live my life to the fullest and can achieve anything
Life is a great thing
If it is used right

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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2003-10-17 09:39 PM


Keep your spirit....you have a lot to look forward to .... heres to brighter days and peaceful thinking....
Greeneyes~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

dertah
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2 posted 2003-10-17 10:36 PM


good onnnnneeeeeee.
rhyme time
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3 posted 2003-10-18 01:48 AM


an absolute great poem
thank you for letting me read it

Silent Evincar
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Here There and Places Between
4 posted 2003-10-18 09:34 AM


Living the life of a "nomad" huh?? You know the person who's friends with a little bit of everybody in each group. I have to disagree though, not really having a place to fit in because your ordinary.... isn't that easy of a life. That's just personal experience. Other than that I agree with the concept and I enjoyed the piece. Looking forward to more.

        NJS

greco
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5 posted 2003-10-18 09:59 AM


hmm very good and very tough question to answer its not really being normal if you are in a big group and you dont fit in with them then you are not really normal to there group
yes you may do some of the things they may do but not all of them
like take jocks you may play a sport and yes you would fit in with the kids on your team but if you just like that sport and just play it then those kids are really going to fit in because most of the kids on that team are all around jocks who watch every sprt and play every game and know everyone in the majors and so on

so i hope this answers your question if not let me know
thanks

greco
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6 posted 2003-10-18 10:10 AM


if this doesent answer just let me know e-mail me or something
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