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Barbara
Junior Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 32


0 posted 2003-10-17 02:41 PM



It`s just an ordinary day..
People run
and people hide.
The world is turning
up and down
and everything is making
so hard sound..

I`m driving on a bus
and hurry to school in my mind..
I`m walking againts this
big, old, yellow building
and I smile!
I smile and cry.

For someone this day may be special,
for someone hurtful.
Everyone is waiting someone, calling their friends, kissing their lovers...

But I`m alone.
I dont want anyone!
I wanna be alone, here.
I push everyone away,
without one smart say.

I dont want anybody
if hes not with me..

If it must be an ordinary day,
but I feel like its not.
`cause Im not udsed
to be without him..
But I guess I`ll have
to get used to me-being alone..

And from now on..
my days will be like this..
just an ordinary days...


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rhyme time
Junior Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 13

1 posted 2003-10-17 03:23 PM


i really enjoyed your write

i know exactly what you mean

dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

2 posted 2003-10-17 05:04 PM


ahh yes, to just go back huh?  well, good news, you seems to be moving on.  good write.
Silent Evincar
Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179
Here There and Places Between
3 posted 2003-10-18 09:40 AM


So cold and pain is just seeping from the words. To give up is to never say you ever tried; and if all else fails the sun will settle the ordinary day. Much appreciated.

       NJS

      

greco
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 85
buffalo ny
4 posted 2003-10-18 11:33 AM


for some reason i just pictured this as a song as i read it like i think venessa carilton song a song just an ordinary day

very good write

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