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Teen Poetry #7

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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-10-16 06:25 AM

I'm caught in a web,
Of mixed up emotions,
And things left unsaid.

I wonder what it's like,
To be only on the outside,
And not have to fight.

Now I'm asking you,
What does forever mean?
Is what you say true?

IF you give me your heart,
I won't do you wrong,
And it'll be worthwhile, from the
start.

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (10-16-2003 06:26 AM).]

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-10-17 07:53 AM

This was really well written and sweet! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-10-17 02:13 PM

good onnnnnneeeeeeeee

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

3 posted 2003-10-18 09:53 AM

Sometimes all you need is a whole second to show someone just what you can do. There's strength and faith in this piece as well as self assertiveness. Commendable.

NJS

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

4 posted 2003-10-22 08:33 PM

Ooo, this one was nice. Good...Loves.

*I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...*

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