Chapter Two - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #7

Chapter Two

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

0 posted 2003-10-15 07:00 PM

Six years of decayment soon to be cleansed
a place that was once so distant of pain which is now my home.

Defiled and pillaged are all my dreams till tomorrow
when in the first ray of corrupted moon I will leave.

Shadow to the cold wall; sliding away from kinder eyes
thrown with wind of change, laid by paricles of sand.

Farewell to you when I finaly reach summers gracious feet
an arid paradise owned only by sweet rays of sunshine.

Let you not rot, no beloved ones, let your spirit rise above
bring light to one not whole in amidist of going home.

NJS

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-15 10:03 PM

ahhh decayment....(i lower my head, glare up, finger tips touch, and i grin like the grinch) good write my friend.

Whitehowl
Junior Member

since 2003-10-14

Posts 10

2 posted 2003-10-15 11:57 PM

Nice use of words. I liked this alot, keep up the good work.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.