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Teen Poetry #7

the struggle (part 2)

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-10-13 02:39 PM

this is the seconed part of a number of poems that go together i don't know how many i will right but here is the first one: /pip/Forum85/HTML/000068.html

and now for the seconed

I’ve struggled immensely
For my fighting I have nothing to show

I was happy once
At the begging you’ll never know

I’ve tried to run away
But your always close behind

I’ve dug deeper with in myself
Like there’s something more to find

I hate you trying to control me
But it’s something I will not let you do

There was happiness
When I had complete control of you

I scream and yell
But I’m only herd from time to time

I don’t like hearing me talk
In this voice that isn’t mine

Cut me

Burn me

Doe something
Quickly end my pain

I can’t deal with him in my life
Creating all this shame

I can’t control my fits of rage
I just want it all to end

I cry out of now where
I need someone to call a friend

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-13 11:09 PM

i've always thought of myself taking on a student who would truly deserve to learn my technique. good write.

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