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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2003-10-12 07:28 PM

"Whatever Your Name Is"

You would craddle her in your arms,
That night in the hospital bed,
I'd be in the hall on the phone,
Not rememb'ring a word I've said.
She'd grab my thomb so strong and tight,
For the first time I'd understand.
All my doubts were suddenly gone,
As her head fell into my hand.

I shed a tear and said:" I am a dad,"
But she is the baby we never had...

Cause we've never met,
And you're nowhere to find.
But you're out there somwhere,
And always on my mind.
Whatever your name is...
Whatever your name is...

I've painted a picture of you
You have got big brown hazel eyes
Sparkled chocolate coloured hair
Skin as soothing as a sunrise.
I'd like a chance to talk to you
But since you're a vision it's insane
And if we're ever introduced
I hope Ellisa is your name!

Invite you to dinner just me and you
But my dining table is not for two...

Cause we've never met,
And you're nowhere to find.
But you're out there somwhere,
And always on my mind.
Whatever your name is...
Whatever your name is...

You're not the bride and I'm not the groom,
So I'm sitting alone in my room..

Cause we've never met,
And you're nowhere to find.
But you're out there somwhere,
And always on my mind.
Whatever your name is...
Whatever your name is...

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-12 10:15 PM

whoa....that was good, unique above all else. excellent writing.

Finalinsomnia
New Member

since 2003-10-07

Posts 8
Washington, USA

2 posted 2003-10-12 11:51 PM

I have to agree with dertah. One of a kind write, really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2004-03-19 04:33 PM

I really love this one. Im sure alot of people can relate to it.
Thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2004-03-23 10:55 PM

I really enjoyed this. It was diffent from what you normally see. Nice write, thanks for the read.
Jen

Everything gets better in the end, and if it's not better, it's probably not the end.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

5 posted 2004-03-24 06:19 PM

I agree with everyone else. Difently different, and it's always good to see different writings. Well done.

"I...I bleed...For no one..but myself...For me and no one else!"~ MudVaYne

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