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Teen Poetry #7

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Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

0 posted 2003-10-12 04:08 AM

Here I am again -
choking on the foot
I’m getting good at shoving in my mouth,
spitting out thoughts
faster than my brain can filter them.
Another attempt at verbal suicide.

There you go again -
turning your back
to drown out what I never wanted to say,
walking away
from something you asked to start.
Another photo op of your back.

Here I stand alone -
tripping over words
that you’ll probably never hear,
hoping the wind is on my side.
Just wanted to tell you I love you.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-12 04:39 PM

ohhh out of no where comes the ending. good write.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2003-10-12 08:00 PM

Good write. The ending was REALLY great. ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

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