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saddest girl
New Member

since 2003-10-12

Posts 4
living in your letters

0 posted 2003-10-12 12:44 PM

i miss those phone calls
that lasted all night
and those times when we
didnt talk but just listened
to the sound of you guitar
i miss the times when youd
hold me close to you
when nothing else mattered
i miss looking into
you deep blue eyes
not thinking about anything
but you and me
us
together as one
seperated into two
worlds apart now
saddness has consumed me
i try to stay strong
and not give in
but its just an act
i pretend it doesnt bother me
and that i dont care
but deep inside its killing me
i care
someday ill find someone new
but ill never fully open up
the way i did with you
i hope you miss me too

Finalinsomnia
New Member

since 2003-10-07

Posts 8
Washington, USA

1 posted 2003-10-12 04:30 AM

A touching piece... I can't really relate to the emotion within it but I really liked it. Lots of passion and heart behind it. Keep writing.

Barbara
Junior Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 32

2 posted 2003-10-12 12:52 PM

oh... I know how you feel.. I feel the same way, just that Im very angry beside that lost and sad feeling

Everything will be okay

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-10-12 04:40 PM

im there with you on this one.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2003-10-13 02:43 PM

Wow...I agree with everyone else. Good job.

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

5 posted 2003-10-14 09:41 PM

Always the end comes to the tune of "I'll find someone else but never like you" idea. My question is: how will there ever been anyone else after that?? Blue eyes, phone calls, guitars, and nights in each others arms.... not easy to replace. Smile saddest girl this was very nice.

NJS

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

6 posted 2003-10-15 10:41 AM

I like the message you're conveying. And I can definitely relate. Especially with the last few lines. Nice work.

*I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...*

saddest girl
New Member

since 2003-10-12

Posts 4
living in your letters

7 posted 2003-10-15 02:47 PM

thanks everyone

there will be more to come.

Quiet Acquiescence
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 70
somewhere out here

8 posted 2003-10-15 06:03 PM

Awww. It's gonna be okay. Stay strong honey. *nice job*

~*~Hope restores broken wings; faith helps us fly.~*~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-10-18 09:54 AM

Hello,
I know this is kind of late, but I wanted to welcome you to Passions In Poetry. This is a very good first post, with lots of emotion written in it.
I hope that you enjoy it here at PIP. Please check your e-mail for a special greetings from all of us at Passions.

Ethel/garysgirl
Moderator/Passions In Poetry

Toasty
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin

10 posted 2003-10-18 05:03 PM

powerful, emotional- a wonderful poem. I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your stuff. Keep up the excellent work.

~toasty

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales.

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