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dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584


0 posted 2003-10-11 05:28 PM


my soulmate....
che married another,
but tonight....

we held hands,
walking under the stars
comforting one another

i sang you a song,
a song of my love....
my unconditional love

we kissed,
hugging tight,
and overwhelmed with emotion

and we made love,
like we had dreampt to do....
it was so perfect

but tonight,
it was all in my mind....
sad isn't it?

DS

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Barbara
Junior Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 32

1 posted 2003-10-12 12:54 PM


If it cant be a reality, why wouldnt we dream?
Silent Evincar
Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179
Here There and Places Between
2 posted 2003-10-15 12:19 PM


Ahhh the sweet sorrow and pain of one who's tried but has utterly failed. Not themselves mind you but in a concept of life.

             NJS

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