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Teen Poetry #7

color coordinated

colifer
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 37
Ohio

0 posted 2003-10-04 02:13 AM

Green pea soup
in a green bowl
on a green table
in a green room
with green doors
match green windows
and a green lamp.

And i feel like a blue spoon.........

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

1 posted 2003-10-04 11:48 AM

very original.. I love the blue spoon part at the end. Great job!

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

2 posted 2003-10-04 01:28 PM

this was cute...i liked the last line the best, it gave the poem a more deeper meaning, keep up the good work, thanx for the great read, be blessed.
sha-sha

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-10-11 01:10 AM

ha ha, some say green is the color of guinesses.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

4 posted 2003-10-15 10:35 AM

Wow...this was SO original and simply AWESOME!!! At first, I wasn't exactly sure what you were trying to convey...and that last line just drew it all together! This poem is definitely going in my library! I can't even begin to tell you how much I liked it! It's so simple...yet it's deep and meaningful...I love it! Nice work!

*I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...*

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