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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-10-03 06:45 AM



Laughter,
Tears,
Happiness,
Betrayal...
All these things were
The effects of something
I've created,
Something that is no longer
In my control.
But with all these new thoughts,
There comes questions too.
What would happen,
If I did that?
Or what WOULDN'T happen?
At one time, long ago,
The passion was engulfed in flames,
Now it's so ice-cold,
It hurts to touch it,
Or even think of it.
After all this time,
And all this thinking,
I know what I must do,
But when it comes to that time,
WIll I have the strength,
To go through with it?


"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

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shara
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since 2002-05-21
Posts 69
florida/USA
1 posted 2003-10-03 09:14 AM


simply deep that was some real talent right there.  i olved everybit of it, keep em' comin' be blessed. thanx for another great read.
  ~sha-sha
                     

dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

2 posted 2003-10-03 12:36 PM


and in the end, we question if thats all there was.  good write.
Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2003-10-03 03:43 PM


Thanks you two. I'm glad you liked this, your thoughts are much appreciated.

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

SilentTears
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
4 posted 2003-10-13 06:44 PM


Ooo...very much enjoyed this one. I think that when it comes to something like this...we always manage to get through it. Whether we find the strength or not...we just manage. Nice write, by the way. Loves.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

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