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swinging2bbvd
Junior Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 14

0 posted 2003-10-02 12:12 PM

This was a difficult poem for me, one of my first from over a year ago. in this poem my long term relationship had ended and i was seeking renewed friendship. i loved her endlessly as i do now, but we both knew it could not work, so in my pain came this peice:

Chandra, Sleep as Well as I...

Each new night I welcome without regret
I see the beauty in every new sunset
Even as the icy air rolls in
I know my blood won't run thin
My swollen heart will keep me warm
Through what would be another sullen storm
Your truly in my arms tonight
I'll feel your form and hold you tight
And I know as I go into my sleep
It's our renewal of love that I weep
No more tears of lonely pain
The light you shine shows again
Though through great gaps we embrace
Knowing you still love me erases this space

Ronald J Walsh

swinging2bbvd
Junior Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 14

1 posted 2003-10-02 01:04 PM

i just replied to a bunch of people which dropped this poem pretty far, i just wont to bring it back up because i really want to here what you guys think of it.

swinging2bbvd
Junior Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 14

2 posted 2003-10-02 01:06 PM

oops didnt work well now i feel stupid. but id still really like to here from you guys. hope someone finds my link. *crossing fingers*

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

3 posted 2003-10-02 01:44 PM

well i found it and i amglad i did, tis is so well put together, i almost cried, it is really good, thanx for the great read, be blessed and keep em'comin'

much luv,
sha-sha

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

4 posted 2003-10-02 05:00 PM

Oh the line of swollen hearts and blood not running thin. Its a reminder of the strength what we call persistence. If love is truly blind; then how do we write such truths?? Just a thought... most enjoyed read.

NJS

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

5 posted 2003-10-03 12:17 PM

can it ever not work out? i think thats bullplop. but excellent write.

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