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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-01 03:06 PM

No sweet goodbyes
only broken hearts
only teary eyes
No way to say I love you
when it's not true
no way to let go
no way to prepare
for that kind of blow
the goodbbye
Never a sweet goodbye
always crying
a tear drops
for the love dying
broken hearts
teary eyes
watching her kiss other guys
holding his hand
No sweet goodbyes
only broken hearts
and teary eyes
I can't say goodbye

-"Poet Nascitar, Non Fit"
-"A Poet Is Born, Not Made"

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

1 posted 2003-10-01 03:28 PM

"A tear drops
for the love dying".....I love that line, this was a touching poem, i thought it really good, keep writing and in time all the saddness goes away...trust me, i been there before...be blessed

~sha-sha

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

2 posted 2003-10-02 02:23 AM

Lets hear it for mixed emotions. You one word that I despise in the English Dictionary.... Goodbye. It burns the heart and sears your soul. Even when we know its over, how do we let go of something that can be so sweet. The nectar of life stinks, that is until you taste it for the first time. Very good and I could follow it easily, I appreciate that. Maybe that acid stuff has potential??

NJS

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-10-23 05:27 PM

yes.....damn that man...errrrrrrrr

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-10-24 07:13 PM

This hit really close to home. I wish I had more to say about the poem, but for now I'm just gonna go sit and think about life. Thanks for the read.
Jen

"Worry is like a rocking chair--it gives you something to do but
it doesn't get you anywhere." -- Dorothy Galyean

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-10-24 08:53 PM

This is a really sad poem with lots of
emotions in it. I hope that it's not from your
own personal experience.
Hugs to you,
Ethel

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

6 posted 2003-10-27 03:54 PM

So true and saddening, I really liked this one, my favorite line was
"a tear drops
for the love dying"

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Ally Stone
Junior Member

since 2003-10-20

Posts 48
D.C.

7 posted 2003-10-27 05:30 PM

"no way to prepare
for that kind of blow"
Wow, this line totally knocked the wind out of me. Amazing poem, keep it up!

Baby D
Junior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 14

8 posted 2003-10-28 06:31 AM

A really good poem, i know what your going through, i could really relate to it. good one mate...

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

9 posted 2003-10-29 10:41 AM

I really enjoyed this. This was quite a beautiful poem. I used to read your poetry quite often, but then you seemed to disappear from the forums. Glad to see that you're back! Nice work. This will definitely be going in my library for future reading.

*I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...*

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

10 posted 2003-10-29 12:01 PM

hay i haven't seen you for a long time it's good to see you’re still writing.
this poem was grate it had many powerful lines in it that just gives it this powerful emotion throughout the hole piece good work and keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

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