why would you fault me?????

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shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

0 posted 2003-09-30 10:58 PM

why would you fault me
after all that we've been through
it was only a simple poem
I never intended to hurt you
suddenly I'm the one in the wrong-
did we forget that I was the one neglected
for almost two and a half years
I never left your side, yet I always felt rejected

why would you fault me
your mother was the reason you were in such pain
I only wanted to be there
but all you did was hand me the blame

why would you fault me
I only wanted to feel loved
but you couldn't even do that
for it was only christopher you thought of

why would you fault me
when it's nearly been three years
would you just move past this
and finally stop my invisible tears
no longer can I apologize
for I know not what I did
it's time to search your soul
maybe that's where all the answers are hid...

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

1 posted 2003-10-01 02:21 PM

this pice was good i like how you presented the problem that their was and had a finsh question that brought it all together. keep righting

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

2 posted 2003-10-01 04:51 PM

hi thank you for the reply, it means a lot to me, this is only my secind poem, maybe i will be better at it in due time, again, thanx for the reply. be blessed.

~sha-sha

sunshinemc
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 27

3 posted 2003-10-02 12:03 PM

This poem was awesome, i can relate. The last paragraph was amazin to me, it fit so well together...ur thoughts so precise. Keep it up
<3

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

4 posted 2003-10-02 02:32 AM

I feel it, but I don't. On an emotional level I'm not there but I can undeerstand with the great job of writing you did. I see almost scolding, not begging; nor explanation. It's weird, but hey. I think like that. Good job.

NJS

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

5 posted 2003-10-02 08:44 PM

hey guys and gals, thanx for all your posts, it means a lot to me to know what you think about them, yeah, i know that it must be pretty weird because we don't know each other, but it's like our poetry introduces us to one another so we have this personal tour through the minds and hearts of each other and for some of us, that is more than we give our "friends" and family. thanx again
lots of love, be blessed.

~sha-sha

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

6 posted 2003-10-03 12:15 PM

Apologizing for something you don't know what you did means someone isn't communicating with you, and tellilng you what's wrong. It wouldn't mean so much if this person didn't matter so it's not like yo can just walk away from it like it means nothing. I sympathize. It's a VERY hurtful place to be. As for the other looking inside to find the answers...[well if they aren't even telling you what they are holding against you then it may be they aren't going to tell themselves.] Lot's of heartache comes from this. It is something I am very familiar with, but I also know I love this person no less for it anyway. I understand, and been there, and done that. You aren't alone in this if that helps. Sending a hug.

Love,
Terri~

p.s.I'm glad you emailed me, and told me you posted here. That's why I kept not being able to find you.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

7 posted 2003-10-03 12:20 PM

good onnnnnneeeeeeeeee.

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