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Tounge Tolerance Poem
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Tounge Tolerance Poem |
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sixington Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 53Utah |
I use my tounge to stand up for those around me, stand up for those i love those i hate, those i'm not allowed to love. I use my tounge to stand up for me and those like me; depressed, oppressed, messed with our minds, told us it was wrong, and tried to change, but only maimed our spirit, our will you kill my hope, esteem, you seem to see how much you're hurting me but it goes on and on and i use my tounge to heal the wounds you make, the wounds i inflict, cuz it's up to me, to be the one to have sung the true me, who i really am and who i wish i were. I use my tounge to change the world, cuz tolerance only works if you fall with it, sacrifice judgment, cuz that's all that matters. Acceptance, repentance, control of your fears, embrace, face your differences, peers, fears cuz i know it's clear we all need love the metaphorical dove, and power over yourself. myself. we don't need war, don't need to score with the UN, so i'll give you ten minutes and it's finite but it's my night to hold you, even if they won't let me. |
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shara Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 69florida/USA |
life and death is in the power of the tongue.... I am so surprised no one has responded to this peice yet...it's awesome. It is a very profound writing and i am looking forward to reading more from you. >>>Be blessed |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
i'm speechless  gr8 write =)A river of change is rushing over me, through me. Forfeit to the waters, forget the past. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
wonderful....absolutely wonderful. |
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