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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-09-29 03:50 PM



I'm sorry,
I wish there was more to say,
To simply take your pain,
And make it all fade away.

I'm sorry,
For causing you so much despair,
And giving you more pain,
Than you should have to bare.

I'm sorry,
For I've become a nothing,
And for ever giving back,
A certain chain and ring...

You are everything.

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

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1 posted 2003-09-29 10:13 PM


Lots of pain in this, and remorse - well done!

      Carpe' Diem
The Canuck, Sharon  

shara
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since 2002-05-21
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florida/USA
2 posted 2003-09-30 10:32 AM


Okay...I forgive you, this was an awesome peice, so much pain and emotion, yet it's stated so simple, I hope she forgave you, thanks for the great read.

sha-sha

Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2003-10-01 06:38 AM


You mean...."I hope HE forgave you"

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
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BFE
4 posted 2003-10-02 08:22 AM


This was good...

**To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.**

dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

5 posted 2003-10-03 11:50 AM


tis true, without the other half......nothing.  good one.
shara
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since 2002-05-21
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florida/USA
6 posted 2003-10-03 01:27 PM


so sorry, i hope HE forgave you
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2003-10-03 03:31 PM


you are and always will be much much more than a nothing, and he...
he don't deserve ya anyhow hon...
love ya Staci....Heart hugs neice of mine....

Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
8 posted 2003-10-03 03:42 PM


Thanks everyone, I'm glad you liked this.

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

SilentTears
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
9 posted 2003-10-13 06:45 PM


Very good. That's all I can say...this was just awesome. Loves.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
10 posted 2003-10-14 04:04 AM


Awsome piece I really can relate to what you are going through.Keep up the awsome work!
    Lauren

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