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Teen Poetry #7

death better lived

greco
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 85
buffalo ny

0 posted 2003-09-28 10:29 PM

To be alive
Is not such a great thing
To be alive all you have is pain
To be alive all you have is trouble an no time to enjoy the finer things in life

But to be dead
Is a great thing
To be dead you are free of everything
To be dead you are able to do anything
To be dead is not such a bad thing
To fear death now that is a horrible thing

sixington
Member

since 2003-07-14

Posts 53
Utah

1 posted 2003-09-29 08:37 PM

Honey, being alive is so great. I wish i could help you. Expressive poem, but it seemed a little too structured to me. Email me and i'd be happy to talk. *hug* hope everythings alright.

greco
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 85
buffalo ny

2 posted 2003-09-29 09:26 PM

no its not about dying its about fearing death i dont know y people fear it there is nothing to be afraid of but yet some people do

greco
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 85
buffalo ny

3 posted 2003-09-29 09:28 PM

i like living dont get me wrong sorry i guess it kind of didnt come out the way i wanted it to but i am still learning
but thanks for the greeting that was very nice

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

4 posted 2003-10-23 04:59 PM

ahhh death....they did save the best gift for last didnt they....

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