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Teen Poetry #7

Just Waiting

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-09-25 09:22 PM

Dark smoky rooms
That fill my head with fear
I have a plan to get myself
Far away from here

One foot is stuck here
While I try to get the other out the door
Half my mind is stuck here
Like there something I waiting for

My life has only fallen
since I have made this my home
what I have before this
was just being alone

now there is a plan
to do something I had before
but like I said no ling ago
there is something I’m waiting for

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2003-09-25 11:05 PM

I liked this! It was good

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2003-09-26 06:22 AM

Beautiful work!! There's always that something you're looking for...Your poem expressed this well. Great job!! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

Why
Junior Member

since 2003-09-26

Posts 32
Middle of nowhere

3 posted 2003-09-26 09:12 PM

that was a beautiful poem.it reflects my girlfriends life.i would love to see more like it

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

4 posted 2003-10-17 05:27 PM

it doesnt matter when, we're all waiting for something all the time.

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